LI: To understand the structure and language features in an explanation
To upset someone is to make them disappointed, unhappy or worried. In the story GoldiLocks and the three bears Goldilocks makes some unwise decisions to trespass and use other people’s things. Have you ever made someone feel blue before?
GoldiLocks did not want to make anyone feel blue. She didn’t want to be curious but she could not put her mind off it so she barged in without knowing the consequences. When she went inside she didn’t want to eat their food but the smell of porridge was just too good so she tasted their food and destroyed their furniture and went to sleep in their bed.
Barging into people’s houses, trespassing and breaking their things can be a crime and it will bring you to jail or will be an expensive fine. It also shows dishonesty, cruelty and in result it will be added to your criminal record.
In all religions stealing is a sin and if it keeps on going it will result in not spending eternity with God. The consequence of stealing and lying is jail time.
To help us understand how to write an explanation we looked at the purpose, the structure (what it looks like) and the language features. An explanation tells us how or why something is the way it is. To help us understand this we learnt about cause and effect. Cause and effect is an action and a reaction. We used the story of Goldilocks and the 3 Bears to help us understand this. Here is our explanation that describes how Goldilocks upset the Bear family.