Day: December 8, 2022

Comment Thread

I revised on how to comment thread.

First we revised on how to comment thread. The parts are greetings, thoughtful comment, connection, more information, question and farewell.

Next we chose partners to write I comment thread with.

I enjoyed this activity because I revised on how to comment thread. I need to improve on writing more comments to more people. I did well at writing the question

Writting My Own Story.

I created my own story.

First we brainstormed ideas. I found a good title called The Hunter.

Next I planned the my story out.

Then I drew a book cover.

Then I wrote my story. My story was about “Sefa, could you go hunting for us please?” Said Papalili. “Ok” said Sefa. Sefa goes to hunt in the woods. “Sefa, could you go hunting for us please?” Said Papalili. “Ok” said Sefa. Sefa goes to hunt in the woods.  He was the most vicious, most dangerous, most untrustworthy villain in the world. He tried to grab a stick and tried to grab the key to unlock the cell. He unlocked the cell and found an item that will make him a superhuman. He goes and trains a lot to make sure he has so much power that he can defeat Dominos. He trained for 3 months. His dad starts to worry so he calls the police to do a full search on where he was last seen. Sefa went to fight Dominos. He fights him and beats him with a powerful move. He goes back to his house and does not see his dad so he just waits until he gets back. Sefa Thought he defeated dominos but he didn’t he broke through the ground. Sefa saw him and wanted to defeat him again but there were two of them. Dominos and Pizza Hut. Dominos and Pizza hut formed together to make a giant villain. He needed more power so he battled them. He cut their legs and took their power. He kept on hurting them until he got all their power. He finally defeated him and he dropped his soul. He threw the earth’s core.

I enjoyed this activity because I created my own story. I need to improve on adding more speech marks. I did well at figuring out a title.

Commanding Conversation.

I learnt how make a conversation.

First we learnt how to make a conversation. I made a conversation about two people talking to each other.

Next I thought about what the people are talking about. For example: I wrote that the people were talking about going home.

I enjoyed this task because I learnt how to write a conversation about things. I need to improve on thinking about more ideas. I did well on writing about the horses.

Basic Facts Boxes

I learnt to do basic facts boxes.

I completed ordered addition. I got all of my questions correct. I got 1 minute and 56 seconds. I need to improve on going on a higher level to challenge myself.  I did well at answering the question.

How to Make a Marble Mazes

If you follow these steps you will learn how to make a marble maze.

Materials:

Hard board

Maze

Straws

Scissors

Steps:

 

  1. Make a in and out.
  2. Glue the maze down on the hard board.
  3. Cut out the straws to the about the same size as the lines.
  4. Glue the straws down where the lines are.
  5. Get a marble and try to get through the maze.