I learnt how to comment.
First I leanrt what to write to have a good commenting. Greeting, what I learnt, what I enjoyed, what they need to improve on, and a question.
Next I wrote the comment. The comment was hard to write but I tried and write it better. I wrote to Otahuhu School.
I enjoyed this task because I learnt how to comment on other peoples flim. I did well on writing what they need to improve on. I need to improve on writing the question.
