Day: June 22, 2022

Sharks

I learnt so many new facts about sharks. I learnt 4 facts about sharks.

First I learnt that sharks don’t have bones, they have cartilage.

Next I learnt that there are 1,250 species of sharks in the world but there are 112 in New Zealand.

Then I learnt that shark eggs are 1.5 meters long.

Lastly I learnt that a whale shark is 12 meters.

I enjoyed this activity because I learnt new facts about sharks. I did well at reading every sentence. I need to improve on finding more facts.

 

Explaination

I learnt how to plan a explanation.

First I planned my explanation. Then I chose a topic that I knew. I chose rain because i know how rain works. We used the TIES structure which are title, Introduction, explaination and summury.

Next I wrote the explaination. My explaination was. The condensation moves to a cloud and the vapour gets thicker and thicker and then the rain falls and in the river then it moves to the sea then the evaporation moves to the clouds then it restarts over again. The rain gets heavy enough to fall under the gravity. Rain is made up out of water, Evapouration, Condensation and clouds. This is what is needed for rain to be formed.Rain can harm people by raining so much that there will be a flood and hail. Hail will hurt people so as a flood.

Then I wrote summury. My summury is. Rain comes down fast or slow. hard or soft depending on the colour of the clouds if the clouds are light grey it will rain soft and slow. If the clouds were dark grey it will rain hard and fast.

I ejoyed this activity because I planned a explaination. I did well at planning. I need to improve using capital letters at the start of every sentence.\